Thank you
Your poem gave me chills for some reason. Simply because its amazing/haunting. I don't know if i interpreted it correctly. I felt it was 10 minutes till death. For some reason "the deep red rose blossoming on his chest" reminded me of a blood rose from a wound. I felt like i was the "observer" of his last breath. I hope i don't sound to morbid. Very beautiful words. I second Psyche's notion
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*~sunflower